Maybe I should continue the story a bit. You are the second to find the ending abrupt. I do have a dozen more scenes sketched out. You got me thinkin, Nibbins.
Oh that would be good - i was afraid you were mad at me - part of the thing with prompts is that you can finf yourself having to include stuff that’s awkward to fit in - but i would like to see more of this
Wow. Just, wow.
Just that I was really enjoying the writing and I had forgotten that it was a prompt so it wrapped up neatly when I was ready for more -
Maybe I should continue the story a bit. You are the second to find the ending abrupt. I do have a dozen more scenes sketched out. You got me thinkin, Nibbins.
Oh that would be good - i was afraid you were mad at me - part of the thing with prompts is that you can finf yourself having to include stuff that’s awkward to fit in - but i would like to see more of this
Honestly, I love notes and responses... no getting mad here!
Very neat indeed. Congratulations - I was a bit disapointed when the flat tyre arrived - could you scrub that bit and carry this on without it?
What bugged you about it? That it wrapped up too fast, that she staged it herself? Or just that the prompt felt forced?
This made me cry. How beautiful and sad. A lovely piece.
Really??? Wow! That truly moves me... you can't imagine.
I love this!
I love the descriptions. Are you planning a sequel?
Oh! Should I?
This was excellent! I love the detail!
This made me feel so many different things. The ending especially. Brilliant work!
That is the best compliment you can get. Thank you Mariella!
Loved this. Great work.
Thank you!