13 fiction flexes
All were interesting. Why I’m I smelling BO and fruity detergent all of a sudden ?
I love the terrible things I do to you, Kathy.
It’s a gift.
This was fun and inspired me to follow through with an idea I've been pushing off.
Love your work!
#4 and #5 are my favorites. The ones I liked least are run-on sentences, which seems like cheating.
Busted!
Great work! Loved #10 the most•
Very cool! I think what was left unsaid is what makes these so effective. Intrigue! I’m a fan of nos. 13 and 2. Excellent.
I love your choices! I wouldn’t have expected them… and they are so different. Yes, intrigue. Little bite, big intrigue.
What makes a story work? for me, mood and meaning, and these have both.
What was left unsaid? That varies; with some, everything is in the one sentence.
Thanks for enticing me to read some very short fiction. I'm not up to long-form right now.
I fully relate!
These are incredible! I especially loved the Eighth Block reference! Perfect. You nailed the vibe completely. 👌
Yeah! You found your egg!
I'm good with eggs.
OMG. The taxi smells.
oh the memories...!
I love these. What a fun exercise.
I had a blast.
All were interesting. Why I’m I smelling BO and fruity detergent all of a sudden ?
I love the terrible things I do to you, Kathy.
It’s a gift.
This was fun and inspired me to follow through with an idea I've been pushing off.
Love your work!
#4 and #5 are my favorites. The ones I liked least are run-on sentences, which seems like cheating.
Busted!
Great work! Loved #10 the most•
Very cool! I think what was left unsaid is what makes these so effective. Intrigue! I’m a fan of nos. 13 and 2. Excellent.
I love your choices! I wouldn’t have expected them… and they are so different. Yes, intrigue. Little bite, big intrigue.
What makes a story work? for me, mood and meaning, and these have both.
What was left unsaid? That varies; with some, everything is in the one sentence.
Thanks for enticing me to read some very short fiction. I'm not up to long-form right now.
I fully relate!
These are incredible! I especially loved the Eighth Block reference! Perfect. You nailed the vibe completely. 👌
Yeah! You found your egg!
I'm good with eggs.
OMG. The taxi smells.
oh the memories...!
I love these. What a fun exercise.
I had a blast.