Delightfully crazy. I loved the distinctive voices of the characters, the complimentary strangeness of them. The fun thing is that they really were quite well-suited for each other, in a way… though I still have no idea where it would’ve gone if not for the TIKI. Many lines made me smile, and this story held my attention all the way through.
Just marvelous- i was trying to spot who wrote what - I think I got it - most of the time - what an hilarious and ingenius story and set up - a great idea and even better to have it from two view points and 2 voices - worked so well. I mean nuts on a stick of course - absolutely mad as a box of frongs - mongoose? leg humping? synthetic carrots? all the wonderful ridiculousness that I adore - thank you so so much for a very special experience. this could easily be a black mirror episode or a Number 9 episode. love you guys!
a veritable farce... were you each waiting for the other and responding to that or was it all done collaboratively with both inputting as you went along ?
Man, getting dissolved on a first date is rrrooouuuggghhh. That's usually like a third date thing for me. This was fun and wild and slightly insane! Loved every second of it!
Delightfully crazy. I loved the distinctive voices of the characters, the complimentary strangeness of them. The fun thing is that they really were quite well-suited for each other, in a way… though I still have no idea where it would’ve gone if not for the TIKI. Many lines made me smile, and this story held my attention all the way through.
I totally agree JM… wasn’t there something kinda adorable about their odd compatibility? I am really happy you enjoyed it!
Thank you. I dunno where these two came from but it worked out.
Just marvelous- i was trying to spot who wrote what - I think I got it - most of the time - what an hilarious and ingenius story and set up - a great idea and even better to have it from two view points and 2 voices - worked so well. I mean nuts on a stick of course - absolutely mad as a box of frongs - mongoose? leg humping? synthetic carrots? all the wonderful ridiculousness that I adore - thank you so so much for a very special experience. this could easily be a black mirror episode or a Number 9 episode. love you guys!
Yes, Nick! After we finished it I was thinking that it should be a Black Mirror! I love how you picked up on the mad silliness of it.
a veritable farce... were you each waiting for the other and responding to that or was it all done collaboratively with both inputting as you went along ?
We waited for each other, passing it back and forth as the events unfolded… meaning we never knew what would happen next.
Love you too Nick. Thank you for being such an invested reader. It was a blast to make.
Puts my worst date in the deep, deep shade!
What a fabulous collab 😊 I listened first and then read it, to extract all the meaty juices from it. It was so tasty.
Brilliant.
But aren’t they kinda cute together too? Isn’t it kinda a happy ending?
speak for yourself vixen!
Yes… I guess the things that feel most worthwhile involve a lot of work and effort!
Spoken like a true Lang-eating vixen, Ziv...
So, so tasty… 😋
so many juices. Thanks Zivah!
Man, getting dissolved on a first date is rrrooouuuggghhh. That's usually like a third date thing for me. This was fun and wild and slightly insane! Loved every second of it!